Copyright -Björn Rudberg
“So this is how it’s gonna look?”
“That is, if we leave now”
“You mean the “now” that’s 2 centuries ago”
“It’s the minimum that’s going to take her to heal”
“And there are no other alternatives than wandering in space?”
“I showed you the alternative”
“You mean that burning pit of hell we left 2 minutes back?”
“That’s another possible reality, its depends which one we choose”
“Let’s go back and tell rest of them”
“I knew you will see logic once I showed you the realities”
“Better for a few thousands left to become space nomads than being extinct from the rock we all call Earth”
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Written for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle !
For rest of the Fictioneers visit the froggy link below !
Abode of Horus 
That’s a narrow road for just a few.. symbolism goes deep this week.
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That’s our purely making – you reap what you sow !
Thanks for the visit.
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Awesome on and superbly creative:)
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Thanks for the appreciation Vishal !
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Interesting spin on the prompt, Horus.
If I might mention this, a quick proofread would improve it. Fix things like this missing comma: “That is, if we leave now.” Perhaps change “that’s” to “it’s” in the fourth line for readability. Add an “s” to “alternative” in the fifth line.
Sorry if I sound particular today. I liked your story and would love to see it polished to a brilliant shine.
Keep writing, Horus. I’ll be reading.
Have a beautiful holiday season and new year.
All my best,
Marie Gail
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Excellent suggestions Marie – much appreciated. Happy holidays to you too ! 🙂
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Eerily possible. (Shutter)
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It definitely is in my mind !
Thanks for your visit…
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Sci Fi fun!
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Good to know you had fun reading 🙂
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Dear Horus,
An outside of the box take on the prompt, oft repeated, never heeded. We stumble onward and upward (or downward). Depends on which way we’re pointed. Well done.
Aloha,
Doug
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Thanks for the appreciation Doug while we keep stumbling 🙂
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Alternatives and realities 😦 Slim choices.
Ellespeth
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Indeed Ellespeth – it’s us who are ruining our options !
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Choose well, Grasshopper.
A very interesting and entertaining take on the prompt, Horus.
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Thanks for the appreciation Russel !
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