“Fences are to keep you safe, don’t jump them”
“But Dad – how do I learn about what’s on the other side?”
“You need to learn the rules son”
“But what’s more important – rules or ‘to learn’?”
“Too many questions – we’ll be late. Lot of work before we can eat; your sisters may go hungry to bed again.”
He did jump the fence. Sitting by the fireplace he reads the letter.
“Dear Dad,
Am sorry, but I had to jump the fence. And I found the pines with golden acorns. Sending my first haul with Huck, while I stand guard. Get the village folk, there’s plenty for all. No one will go hungry to bed again.
You son”
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This 100 word Flash Fiction written for Friday Fictioneers challenge dated 23 May 2014. It’s a weekly challenge organized by Rochelle Wisoff.
I missed FF for 2 weeks – and missed them bad. Was shunting between cities to take care of ailing mom; finally she is out of hospital and recovering at home !
You can see the other Fictioneer’s take from the froggy link below –
i agree with his idea of jumping over the fence to learn 🙂
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Thanks – people who love driving against the tide loves the concept !
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Brilliant and thought-provoking. We need to discover what at the other side and for it, parents are not always right in the journey of self-discovery:)
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Good parenting is to keep kids safe – not force them to be safe !
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a very important lesson taught by a son to his father. i admire his guts. 🙂
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Thanks K.Z. – anyone can teach something.. isn’t it?
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I hope for a son like that.
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Amen ! Me too 😀
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Cute story, what a nice son!
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Thanks Perry !
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The boy done good! 🙂
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Thanks Sandra ! 🙂
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So sweet!!
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🙂 Thanks Pratik !
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Tradition and the way things have always been aren’t necessarily the answer every time. Good story illustrating that. I think at the end you mean “Your son.”
janet
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Thanks for pointing the Typo Janet.. and also for liking my story ! 🙂
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Sometimes the brave get the gold.. other time he end up dead.. good that luck was with him
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often the luck favours the brave ! 🙂
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(You Son should be your son)
Good for the son! Sometimes one needs to jump the fence to further the cause.
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Thanks for pointing the typo !
.. and you are bang on with jumping the fence 🙂
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Aha! The Pioneer spirit wins again! I like this.
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Thanks for liking Sandra 🙂
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Good story. Sometimes parents have a hard time letting go. Well done. 🙂 —Susan
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very true Susan.. Thanks for liking
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Dear Indrajit,
It sounds like a good thing for the family as a whole that the son did jump the fence. Good story.
shalom,
Rochelle
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Going away from the safe and tested path do give good results sometimes. Thanks Rochelle 🙂
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