“Did he say how to light?”
“You are the witch, you should know”
“But I tried and tried; even waved my fingers like the wicked witch of the west.”
“Maybe you are trying too hard”
“May be you are right.” Lizzy closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and blew on the candle.
“You did it! You are now a fully capable Witch!”
“Let’s try it again.” Lizzy clapped, grinning ear to ear.
As the kids practiced, downstairs Mrs. Windwhisper was tying a bandage around her husband’s thumb.
“Was it absolutely essential? Flipping the fire-coin through the roof to light your daughter’s first candle?”
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This 100 word Flash Fiction written for Friday Fictioneers challenge dated 2 May 2014. It’s a weekly challenge organized by Rochelle Wisoff.
Initially I thought of posting a poem. But it was written quite sometime back – and a bit longer than 100 word – if you wish you may read it here
You can see the other Fictioneer’s take from the froggy link below –
That’s cute. 🙂 What a good dad.
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What a lovely ending, every witch needs a Dad like that 🙂
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Ah.. how nice.. giving a daughter the proper wikkah cred.
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That’s a happy ending, what a good dad or wizard or whatever the father of a witch is called.
Well done
Dee
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A lovely story, what a great dad.
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Thanks Loré, for reading and loving the story !:)
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Hah – great story. I think you might have an extra ‘with’ in here: ‘clapped with grinning’
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Thanks Claire for liking and am hitting the edit button 🙂
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Horus, What a nice close family of witches. 🙂 Well done and humorous. XD
Susan
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Thanks Susan ! 😀
Witches or not – that’s what families do – isn’t it !
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So sweet..!! 🙂
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Thanks Pratik !
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That was fun, Horus. But I can give you two extra words, as “maybe” is one word. 🙂
janet
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Thanks Janet – both for the good words and the edit! 😀
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Gosh! Everyone else has pretty much said it all! Thanks.
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Your liking my story is more than enough Alicia !
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Cute story; I love witches! But they must cause typos, here’s a few more:
“even waved my fingers like (the) wicked witch of the west”
“downstairs Mrs. Windwhisper was tying (a) bandage around his (her) husband’s thumb.”
No charge for these!
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Thanks a lot for the edits Perry – 🙂
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Dear Indrajit,
Every father should want his child to succeed. 😉 I loved this one’s determination. Nice one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle ! I love FF – its the best thing that has happened in my life in recent history ! Thanks again for hosting it…
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Oh, I love this! I suspected her ‘blow’ hadn’t been as effective as hoped. Great job! So far my favorite for the week.
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Wow! Thats a huge complement Judah ! Thanks a lot 🙂
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cute one Indrajit. 🙂
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Thanks Sharmistha !
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What a sweet ending! I love it!:)
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Thanks for loving it Jenni !
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16 day break!!!!! were you on election duty?
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No – “Son Duty: 🙂
Mom was hospitalized.. so made a dashing trip to your city – brought mom back and got her operated – recovering!
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how is she now?
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still recovering.. but at home.. while am back to kol for another trip
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still in Kolkata? 🙂
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yup.. till sunday
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