If and When

If
Only if
We could vanquish those memories
The phoenix rises when we thought
We have put them to rest
 
Soul
Silly soul
The journey, the steps, tear drops
From the day of realization it seeks
Knowing it will take lifetime to be whole
 
And then
When we close
To shutdown all orifice we chose
On that silent darkness
We spread our hands
And feel the warmth and softness we sought
 
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This was till now just my response to M, she thought it deserves a post. Then today Michy liked it too! So accepting the view of two of my friends…
 
 
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10 responses to “If and When

  1. Hey
    Thanks for the comment. It was really sweet of you. Thank you. Happy Women Day. Love your page. How did you get that video on top of there. Have fun.

  2. Nicely written.. Read it in your comment on M\’s page.. 🙂
     
    cheers !!

  3. Its so beautiful Horus..good you shared it with us, thanks to M and Michy…
     
    Hey Horus should I send an article to this mail add or any reference?? How can they know if I can write or not?? What kinda that article has to be?? relevant or has to be some breaking sorta news??
    I have lotta  queries
    cheers
    nidhi

  4. loved it…
    a great…post…
    cheers!!

  5. my o my! well who knew you could find sweetness so quickly within these msn spaces….
    you are  good reminder to me as to why i would stick with this crazy space that eats my blogs (my wonderful international womens day blog, gone!) and all the rest…
    silly souls… that is my favorite for sure. so…. whimsical? sometihng like that. just like it
    thanks for the look at my space andsome of my writing, i tend to be anxious about it, what it really is, what others think of it, like that should matter!
    ok, enough rambling from me.
    ciao for now~
    michy

  6. the moment came.
     
    its raining here 🙂

  7. the pictures are awesommmmmeeeeeeee
    i think i had commented enough on this poem of yours and im glad you published it….it sure does deserve a post…
    annnnnnnd thank you ever so kindly for translating it….your a sweetheart!!

  8. the pictures are awesommmmmeeeeeeee
    i think i had commented enough on this poem of yours and im glad you published it….it sure does deserve a post…
    annnnnnnd thank you ever so kindly for translating it….your a sweetheart!!

  9. really nicely written.

  10. The soul indeed is silly……and quite daft too…..hardly does it keep up with the times much less the brain……
     
    I have been being bugged by memories too……but thankfully its passing…….good riddance!
     
    hows you?
    …..ekta.
     

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